Your first Snippet of my writing

What happens when good falls in love with evil? Does the evil try to be a little good or does the good turn out to be a little evil? There in lies our story, so lets start with with the good side. Our angel was taking a break from Heaven walking down the street in a little country town on earth she had chosen. She chose this little country town because it was not so large as some towns that she had been in lately. She had finished the cases that she was on and was on vacation. She had rented a small apartment on the north side of town and had it furnished modestly. She also had her favorite angelic cat with her for company. She loved all cats but this one was a dear to have around on earth. Although she did have to remind him to keep his wings in while on earth, yes angel cats do have wings too. She was out on this modestly warm autumn day, looking for a new toy for her angelic companion. Looking at the trees and smelling the wind as angels often do when she bumped into a handsome young man carrying his groceries in on hand and looking at his phone in the other. "Oh I am so sorry! I should have been more careful where I was going" she said as she helped him pick up his groceries smiling very sweetly at him. He was quite miffed but when he caught a glimpse of her sparkling blue eyes and the sparkle in them the quip he had ready for her quickly faded and it changed from "Stupid women never watch where they are going" to "That is ok I am sure those beautiful blue eyes were a bit blinded by the sun." She smiled and giggled and said " Why thank you. I am truly sorry maybe we shall meet again one day. next time without you dropping your groceries." She handed him her card and went on to finish looking for her kitty's toy. He looked down at the name on the card grinning evilly, "Yes my dear I am sure we will meet again, and next time we meet it will be more on my terms" he said as he stuck the card in his pocket flames lept in his eyes...

This is just the first little snippet of a book I am working on or maybe short story let me know what you think
Zollyanna